Guys this completely changed my writing, heed it. I often do an entire draft just looking at sentence variation and oftentimes the results are absolutely transformative in the difference.
It works this way with telling stories in images too. Varying the level of detail, scale, media from panel to panel in comics. Contrast. Contrast with an architecture to it. A music to it. Visually as well as with words.
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